The courtroom that is filled with tension becomes more of a dark closet consumed of guilt. Atticus, who is giving everything he has to prove Tom Robinson innocent, is trying to convince the jury to do what is right. At the beginning of Atticus's opening remarks he states, "To begin with, this case should never have come to trial." Although most people knew what the truth was and who was innocent, they went against it all, and sat there and listened to a trial that was already settled. The guilt that filled each and everyone's mind ran on top of what they knew was the right and wrong, and they knew the case should have never came to trial.
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Amy- Really nice job! I don’t really see any mistakes except that if you wanted you could break up some of those sentences-make more, and smaller ones. Um….. nothing really. Guilt is the thesis? That’s good. Sweet job C!
Yeah that’s a great paragraph now you could just go through and add more details to make things a little clearer but honestly you probably don’t need to much of that because I think this is a great paragraph.~Jess~
You did a really good job with your paragraph. I seems that you really thought about it, I thought it was good how you described the courtroom as a dark closet filled with guilt. There isn’t really any mistakes that I see. Good Job!
-Bryn
5 comments:
Nice job Ciara this paragraph is amazing and everything is very clear
fantastic ciara i love it dont see any mistaes great job
Good job c it was really good.!.! You gave good supporting details from the
story. Wonderful paragraph!!!! :)
Ciara I think that this is a great paragraph and I ca completely understand what your saying
WOW!!! that is a Fantastic paragraph. Your organization is amazing and I love the topic you picked.. The details really make the paragraph more clear and understandable... Well I love you hun...holla....
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